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February, 2006

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How to Create an Impossible Website

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Learning about this Internet business is an ongoing adventure for me. I love what I do and I enjoy the challenge of keeping up with technology. With the Internet things are constantly changing, so I really have to stay on my toes.

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Teleclasses & Seminars

Discover the Secrets of Persuading People
to Give You Money

Presented by Michelle Howe, Internet Word Magic
Wednesday, March 8, 2006
10:00 – 11:00 a.m., PST

Ever wondered how you can get people to agree with you and come around to your way of thinking? Or, how to explain your product or service so well that people are reaching for their wallets? It can happen. You just need to know how to push their emotional hot buttons. Let me share with you some of the techniques I use everyday to bring in bundles of cash for my clients.

In this teleclass we’ll be looking at the secrets behind creating persuasive sales copy. Some of the topics we’ll cover include:

  • The do’s and don’ts of sales letter templates.
  • The 8 things you must absolutely do before writing a sales message.
  • How to develop a theme and primary appeal for your message.
  • The 9 things you’ve got to know about your prospect.
  • The number one reason most sales messages are unsuccessful.
  • Where 85% of the power of any sales message is.

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Price includes copy of book, "Persuasive Writing Made Easy"
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Feature Article

How to Create an Impossible Website
by Michelle Howe
(812 words)

A website is only as good as its content and navigation. Visitors come to a site looking for answers and should be able to quickly find the information they need.

Anything you do to interfere with that decision-making process is going to cause your visitor to abruptly leave the site. No business wants to deliberately turn away customers, yet some sites are so poorly designed that they are doomed to failure right from the beginning.

A good example of a poorly functioning site is www.medicare.gov

In late 2005, the U.S. government enacted legislation to offer prescription drug coverage through its Medicare program. Unfortunately, the program offers multiple plans that seniors must wade through to make a decision about which coverage is best for their unique situation.

The government chose to use its www.medicare.gov website as the primary platform to explain the new drug benefit program and offer help for seniors on how to choose their new prescription drug plan.

It seems a logical choice to use a website to give out information, but in this case, the website is as difficult to figure out as the drug benefit program, and compounds the problem.

Site is Difficult or Impossible to Use

Nearly two-thirds of Medicare beneficiaries who use the Internet report that Medicare's Web site is difficult or impossible to use in choosing a prescription drug plan under the new Medicare drug benefit, according to a recent survey conducted by ElderLawAnswers, the Web's leading elder law site.

The Web-based survey found that 63 percent of respondents had used Medicare's Web site (www.medicare.gov) to compare prescription drug plans available in their area, but most did not find the site easy to navigate.

"These findings are significant because survey respondents are already Internet users and presumably have some proficiency in using computers and navigating Web sites," said ElderLawAnswers president Harry S. Margolis, Esq. "The fact that so large a share of this group is having difficulty suggests a more widespread problem."

Analyzing a Widespread Problem

So, let’s take a look at www.medicare.gov and find out why this website is so difficult.

Problem #1 – Overwhelmed by Choices

The website is confusing as soon as you arrive on the site. There are so many choices; you don’t know where to begin to get the answers you need. The site has 29 text links on the main page, 17 links on the left side of the page and 41 subtopic links. A total of 87 choices on just the homepage.

Each time a link is clicked it takes you deeper into the website towards more confusion. Each page you pull up offers another multitude of choices which lead to another page of choices. It’s like being caught up in a never-ending phone tree where you just keep pushing buttons, but never get connected to a human being.

Problem #2 – All Text Links

The Medicare website has taken a good idea to the extreme and turned it into a problem. Text links are an excellent way to introduce information that needs further explanation. You use a text link to bring visitors to a separate page where you can be more detailed in your communication.

However, the correct way to use a text link is to include it in a small paragraph explaining where that link will take them. The reader should have enough information to be able to make a decision without clicking on the link.

Having a page full of text links with no explanation is a frustrating experience for a website visitor. Clicking text link after text link to find the information they want could make your visitor so lost and/or annoyed they leave, never to return.

Problem #3 – No Graphics

A website needs to be interesting to hold a visitor’s attention, and a site with no graphics is boring. Graphics offer a way for the eye to relax a moment after reading text. It also helps to balance the site. Compare reading a website to reading a magazine. Aren’t you more interested in articles that include pictures and colorful graphics?

A site with graphics is not only visually more interesting but often easier to understand. Why do you think we have road signs with pictures on them? A picture is worth a thousand words; what is confusing in the written word is easily understood with a picture or diagram.

Fixing a Widespread Problem

In order for www.medicare.gov to function better it needs to:

  • Dramatically cut back on the text links on the homepage, limiting
    the choices to eight at the most.
     
  • Create a separate site for the prescription drug plan with its own URL.
    The site is also answering Medicare questions, which just adds to the confusion.
     
  • Offer a small paragraph of explanation with each of the text links.
     
  • Add graphics and/or pictures to illustrate explanations.

How impossible to navigate is YOUR website?

© 2006 Michelle Howe

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Grammar Counts
Parentheses

Unless the word is a proper noun, the first word of a complete thought contained in parentheses within a sentence is not capitalized. A complete thought contained in parentheses that appears immediately after a sentence is treated as a separate unit, and the first word is capitalized.

Examples:

parentheses within sentences – first word not capitalized

Several minor changes (these were recommended by Mr. Lloyd) will be made in the final draft.

parentheses within sentence – proper noun capitalized

Your recommendations (Ms. Williams approved all of them) will be incorporated into the marketing survey.

parentheses at end of sentence – first word capitalized

A group of marketing students wishes to tour our main plant in Atlanta. (The students will arrange for their own transportation.)

(Source: How 8, Clark & Clark, 1998)

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About Michelle Howe

Michelle Howe, MBA, president of Internet Word Magic™, is an expert in online copywriting for websites. She translates your marketing materials into the language of the Internet for increased revenue and business success. Michelle consults with companies to assist them in effectively positioning their online marketing message to match their offline branding.

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In my book, “Persuasive Writing Made Easy,”
I share with you the successful writing techniques and tips I use everyday to create irresistible sales copy for my clients. It is a power-packed, step-by-step guide that walks you through the process of creating winning sales messages to dominate the marketplace.

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Internet Word Magic, 14252 Culver Drive #A534, Irvine, CA 92604. Phone: 949-733-1360. michelle@internetwordmagic.com

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Resource MarketPlace

Google Alerts is like having a free clipping service. I’ve been using it for months to stay on top of emerging technology issues and do research for article ideas. The alerts are e-mail updates of the latest relevant Google results (Web, news, etc.) based on your choice of query or topic.

Some handy uses of Google Alerts include:

  • monitoring a developing news story
  • keeping current on a competitor or industry
  • getting the latest on a celebrity or event
  • keeping tabs on your favorite sports teams

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